My Visual Poem

My poem is about time. I wrote about it because it's a topic I'm interested in. I chose the backgrounds I chose because I thought they suited my poem but it's only theses two backgrounds because I didn't get any b-roll. I chose the old paper because I thought that it showed time passing better that any other one except for. The ocean and I picked the ocean because I thought that it shows time passing with it's movement.

How do your special effects affect the overall meaning, mood and audience?
It didn't because I didn't have any special effects in it. It didn't have any because I messed up the beginning effect. Also since I didn't have any b-roll I didn't really have any transitions in between shots. Mostly because I didn't have any shots only two background shots. That is basically how my special effects affected the video.

No I am not satisfied with my results. The reason I am not satisfied with it is because I had no b-roll. Also I didn't like my poem because it had audio skips so my poem didn't make sense. Next time I will get more b-roll and make my audio better. Any way I hope you enjoy my visual poem.

Are you satisfied with your results and why, or how could you make it better?.
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